Hahaha
Yeah man blast that shit down hard. I can't wait to start spittin' tracks together. lol when do we work next, gotta buy some mics.
Hahaha
Yeah man blast that shit down hard. I can't wait to start spittin' tracks together. lol when do we work next, gotta buy some mics.
Rap is poetry
And I know you're trying man... I can hear you're trying to push it out a bit harder. I think you could do it if you understood how to keep your words on beat man. But the words is what you need work on the most. I'm not going to sit here and bash your shit or whatnot, the beat was actually pretty good. Just start from your lyrics. Make sure you have a half decent rhyming scheme that doesn't overuse lyrics. Also, try coming up with a catchy hook for a chorus. When people listen to a rap song, they listen to the words, then the chorus keeps it in their head so they listen to it again. Then they learn the words, and if you got no hook, and your words are garb', well, you got a song everyone laughs at.
If you need help hit me up wit a pm
Hahaha smooth man
"Very crunk" is what I said outloud. Outloud. Loved it.
The beat's alright
You gotta flow it smoother man. Your words fall off beat. Makes me wonder why my shit isn't up here on front page.
First time?
This is pretty dope man. I wish I could throw together beats like this to rap to. Fresh shit man keep it up.
I'm down for a collab man
This is some pretty slick flow dude. I can't seem to get my beats right man, but I think I got some hot lyrics, if you wanna hit me up with some critique. I love this shit. Goin to the iPod.
Fresh shit
This is some pretty fuckin' heavy shit man. This is the kind of quality I wanna get to. Keep it up.
good looks bra thx
Nice easy listen
The beginning was nice, and I love the strong beat halfway through. Overall, great piece. Sounds like you put a lot of time into it.
I'm a full time, all season roofer, but I can do pretty much any type of art you give me. Flash, music, paints, pencils, you name it, I can probably do it. I rap under the name Ratrap now. Check my tunes.
Age 35, Male
Flat roofer
Canada
Joined on 10/12/04